December 22, 2007


  • GOIN’ WITH THE FLOW

    Looking out the window,
    And saying perhaps,
    ‘Twil be as they say,
    Later in the day snow. 

    Across town we hied,
    To hospital to visit son, 
    Good thing early we tried,
    Snow falling  had begun.

    Nursing a grudge  and shivering,
    Against cold sludge,
    We made our way back across town,
    Blithering.

    Southward along York Street,
    Snow carrying a world of woe,
    When did we meet,
    A  place I well know.

    1311 the place that became my heaven,
    An old mansion that became,
    AA to the max,
    And where I learned to play the game,
    Of not falling through cracks.

    I do stop by now and then,
    Take in a meeting and talk,
    Telling other’s stories or ten,
    Our stories, much alike nor do we balk,
    At telling them.

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    1311 York Street

    The faces change,  though the stories do not,
    Different words maybe,
    Same meanings, a lot.
    There is hope for those like us !

     

Comments (17)

  • What a magnificent old building. Too bad it has that big apartment complex behind it instead of a nice sprawling backyard.

    ~ Merry Christmas to you, my friend ~

  • You are amazing.  What a gift you to say things in such a way that all the information is covered and the feeling is there.

    Wonderful brick building.

    No snow here…In fact, it’s warm but…I won’t complain.

    HUGS

    Fran

  • Ok, what did I miss? Son in hospital? Hope it isn’t serious. Enjoyed your “review”.

  • typing one finger, short note to say your diaryland notice had all url’s misspelled. may want to try again.

  • Hope indeed. I just celebrated 23 years sober December 5.

  • you write so gracefully

  • Is your son okay?!?! I’m praying for him. And for you and your dear wife!!

    This poem is a masterpiece in words and in emotion and in communicating some important things! Wow! Your gift with poetry blesses my heart!

    Happy Saturday to you, “Daddy Doug”! Stay safe, warm, and smile! You are loved!!

    C.

  • Your readers need an update on your son and your wife!  Love the poem, it tells a real story. 

    Would love to know what year 1311 York Street was built.  It is beautiful, but I’d hate to pay to heat it.

    Love to you and your family,

    Pat

  • you are such a kind man. best wishes to you and hope you have a wonderful christmas. That building looks just like those in Russia (where I am from). Funny, architecture repeats itself in all locations.

  • This house has been your heaven , Doug ? 
    I suppose your son is better , now .
    Whatever it is courageous to drive in the snow .
    Doug I wish for you both and your family the merriest Christmas . Perhaps will you write a special poem for this Day ? I wish .

    Please go there :http://www.xanga.com/Trotta109/633624449/the-2007-xanga-awards-go-to.html?nextdate=last
    In friendship
    Michel

  • NA meetings sometimes is just a way to pass the time, but there is more to life than just quiting. Going out to take care of others not only helps them but helps the helper. In this season it is good to reflect and that we look forward to more challenges and more rewards. God bless you and your family and that you become prepared to handle the things that will come later.

  • No recent post Doug . This seems weird . I hope all is OK about your son  or yourself .
     I hope you have a great Christmas .
    In friendship
    Michel

  • MERRY CHRISTMAS to you and your family!!

    Love and hugs,

  • I hope you have a wonderful Christmas friend.

  • I hope you have a holiday filled with laughter and happy surprises.

    ~ Merry Christmas Doug ~

  • Sending Christmas blessings and wishes for good health all around Nancy

  • Merry Christmas!!!

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